Might Want to Work on the Arms, The Hands and the Feet, Also Make the...Wait Is this Art a girl or a guy? Draw Something...Uhh..The C-chest..if its a girl....You Might want to Work on the People..and the human Drawings.... i suggest You work on Human's More.....Also...You Might Want to work on the humans Ears.
Ok Lets see the list on to Work on:
* Arms (Less Muscular if its a Girl)
*Chest(Put the Chest if is a girl)
*The shirt....Might Want to do that...
Ok I will Stop i feel like i am Being Mean And bring Down People's Spirit's But HEY Practice MAKES PERFECT! Work on these You will Be Good! Also..You Might Want to rent How to draw manga Out of a Library..Or something like that....